Friday, January 08, 2010

Transience

A chorus less a single voice,
an angel taken from our lives,
his song cut short without a choice,
these thoughts of him all that survives,


An empty space where once was light,
a hole that cannot be refilled,
that spark put out without a fight,
a life that we must now rebuild,


A treasure lost but for his worth,
a soul reclaimed before his time,
to rest in peace within the earth.
to sleep and dream that life sublime.



18 comments:

Brendaline said...

lovely

Khemraaz said...

Vedi vini vinci,really nice Sir,it's wonderful!!!!!!!

Ken said...

very fitting poem 4 a special friend i recently lost

Nekatu said...

Thanks all- and Ken, that poem was partly inspired by your recent loss. True friends once found are never truly lost. :-)

Ken said...

thank u so much,it will be her birthday on Monday 11th Jan,it's beautiful xx

Nosipho said...

wonderful.....wonderful

Nekatu said...

Thanks Nosipho! :-D

Ana said...

Beautifu!!!

Nekatu said...

Thanks Ana- really appreciate the compliment. :-)

Ana said...

Who wrote this????

Nekatu said...

Arik Fletcher, Nekatu Poetry creator, at your service... ;-)

Ana said...

This is BEAUTIFUL!!!!!

Nekatu said...

Glad you like it

Ana said...

;)I write poems too.

Nekatu said...

Excellent- you can share them in the Discussions section, if you want to. There's a bit called "Who else writes poetry?"- feel free to post your work there.

Ana said...

Thank you.

René said...

Thank you Arik xxx

Nekatu said...

You're very welcome. xxxx